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1. Never open a book with weather.
2. Avoid prologues.
3. Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue.
4. Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said”…he admonished gravely.
5. Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose.
6. Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell broke loose.”
7. Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
8. Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
9. Don’t go into great detail describing places and things.
10. Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.
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I’ve heard a lot recently surrounding sugar in fruit. Not only is fruit less condensed with the stuff (who realistically is going to eat 6 oranges on the run??) but while sugar in soft drinks is associated with sugar crashes and even disease, sugar in fruit doesn’t, and the fruit itself has actual health benefits.

Get your sugar from the right place!

I hate when people cut fruit out of there diet! Fruit is good for you! It’s all natural, it will. Not. Make. You. Fat.

Eat fruit!

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